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Numb - Linkin Park



I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless lost under the surface
Don't know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)


I've become so numb I can't feel you there
Become so tired so much more aware
I'm becoming this all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

Can't you see that you're smothering me
Holding too tightly afraid to lose control
Cause everything that you thought I would be
Has fallen apart right in front of you
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)
And every second I waste is more than I can take


I've become so numb I can't feel you there
Become so tired so much more aware
I'm becoming this all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

And I know
I may end up failing too
But I know
You were just like me with someone disappointed in you


I've become so numb I can't feel you there
Become so tired so much more aware
I'm becoming this all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you


I've become so numb I can't feel you there
I'm tired of being what you want me to be
I've become so numb I can't feel you there
I'm tired of being what you want me to be



I done this when I was upset.
I guess you could say that is me.
:/
I'm proud of how this came out, blah.

Art (C) =xxKeiko-Toxicityxx
Numb (C) Linkin Park

Critiques


:iconbananaspazzout:
Very nice, but here are a few things. c:
Her hair should be more 'affected' by her shoulder, so like it curls around her shoulder instead of just falling flat.
Her hands could be a bit bigger, and the left one more clenched. You can use your own hand as a reference for this. ;D And I dunno if you meant the close-up of her hand to look like that, but try to have the joints more sectioned off. ^^
For her pants, the crotch is rather high, as is her right knee. And the back half of her left leg should be visible at that angle.

Over-all, very commanding and full of emotion. Love it! :D
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:iconicethehedgehog:
Amazingly done. <3

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:iconalexsatriani:
like the drawing but don't like the situation what in the draft is going on v_v .

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:iconxxkeiko-toxicityxx:
Thanks sis <3 :heart:

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Cool icon by *Kezzi-Rose <3
:iconxxkeiko-toxicityxx:
Sorry, it's only a drawing.

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:iconxcountingbodiesx:
great job on the anatomy and clothes and shading and everything :D

:hug:

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Somebody please put this freak on a leash.
:iconxxkeiko-toxicityxx:
Thank you very much! :heart: Your comment is really appreciated. <33

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Cool icon by *Kezzi-Rose <3
:iconxcountingbodiesx:
np^^
<3333

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Somebody please put this freak on a leash.
:iconalexsatriani:
yeah i know but the feelings from you ,i can see them in your drawings ;)

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:iconicethehedgehog:
Ye welcome~

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